Hmm...cloudy cloudy sky
Moon ain't far far away
Sharp-sharp moonlight
'Tis as bright as a day
It smells like winter
with cold cold air
'tis a hush hush moment
Feels almost like you're near
Closed closed kohled eyes
with silly silly dreams
..awake under starless skies
When night's almost like day
8 comments:
short n sweet..
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cool images used.its not very hard to pass through these conditions...
alok singh "sahil"
loved the duplication of adjectives...
it is indeed short short & sweet sweet poem....
beautiful :-)
beautiful :-)
thanks yaseen, alok, mayur, raaji
hey...i am already a bit conscious by what i have read and seeing how good you are at writing...so all i am going to say is that i really like this poem, i hope kahin se churai nahi hai...just joking....and keep it going....
nice :)
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