Starless Skies

Hmm...cloudy cloudy sky
Moon ain't far far away
Sharp-sharp moonlight
'Tis as bright as a day

It smells like winter
with cold cold air
'tis a hush hush moment
Feels almost like you're near

Closed closed kohled eyes
with silly silly dreams
..awake under starless skies
When night's almost like day

8 comments:

yaseen said...

short n sweet..

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आलोक सिंह "साहिल" said...

cool images used.its not very hard to pass through these conditions...
alok singh "sahil"

Mayur Pathak said...

loved the duplication of adjectives...

it is indeed short short & sweet sweet poem....

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

beautiful :-)

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

beautiful :-)

Purva said...

thanks yaseen, alok, mayur, raaji

ritika said...

hey...i am already a bit conscious by what i have read and seeing how good you are at writing...so all i am going to say is that i really like this poem, i hope kahin se churai nahi hai...just joking....and keep it going....

Dan* said...

nice :)

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