Albeit with doubts around
I am the thunder that has no sound...
I am the star that
doesn't always shine
I have no wings
But I dream of flying
I know the way,
But cannot lead...
I am the wave
That wouldn't recede
I believe in destiny
But deny fate
I am the sunshine
That'd never fade
I am fire
I am ice
I am frown
I am smile
And I smile with tear in my eye
I am the truth born as a lie
I am black, I am white
I am winter on a summer night
I am fact...I am fiction
I am my own contradiction.
21 comments:
hmmm .. paradox indeed. but i guess thats how we all are.. isnt?
The well-bred contradict other people. The wise contradict themselves. ;)
only one thing to say...you impress me everytime...you're good
nice poem... where did you find it? ha ha.. i mean where did you find the inspiration?
Yo abhinav! everyone's a paradox...depends on how much we realise it and what do we do with it
so rajan are you wise enough to contradict yourself? :)
Thanks paffett!
And AV thanks for the subtle compliment
hey long time after reading ur blog, very nice stuff
really like this post :)
unfortunately I am not billy joel…….
I like the imagery, beautiful in its honesty, especially "I am the thunder that has no sound"...beautiful!
I have forced myself to contradict myself in order to avoid conforming to my own taste.
wow...thats some poem. The content might deal with contradictions but there is no contradicting the quality of your work...quite nice yaar..quite nice indeed.
luv
amith
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I love the pic! and "i am the thunder that has no sound" bit.
Are you gemini? :)
btw new post up at my blog.
nice one ! with "i am my own contradiction", u struck bingo ! :)
M typical piscean, Dphatez :)
Thanks Kanika
bravo....beautifully written....how come you never fail to produce a fine piece.....you should write a book someday
your words highlight the contradictions of life yet show the underlying oneness beautifully.
I shallwrite a book someday... Mr Khan :)
Thanks for the appreciation
wow amazing.... so true... i like the way u write true things
Hello purva..I reached ur blog...as a recommandation frm one of a frd...it is feels good and connected when u transfer ur innerself on to the paper...indeed its all Fiction yet..Fact...(Personally I like fiction!)
Take care..n keep blogging..
Priti
Hi,
Your poems are vey good.
Try posting your poems at museindia.com to get real critical acclaims from the literary experts there.
www.museindia.com
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