Yeh Jo hai Zindagi....

This is the first time I am posting a poem in hindi...The essence was getting lost in English.



Coffee ke cup si mehakti hui
Baarish ki bundon si tapakti hui
Aur un bundon pe naachti patto si
Zindagi mili....acha laga

Ek bachche ke hoton pe baithi thi
Chhup rahi thi....
Maine dhyaan se dekha tab dikhi
Acha laga

So rahi thi chandni raat mein
Ek ped ke neeche
Us aasmaan mein chupte chand me nazar aayi
Acha laga

Beh rahi thi ek nadi si
Chupkar kai lehron mein
Un laheron ke beech
Jhaankti nazar aayi....
Acha laga

Natkhat hai...chalaak hai
Masoom hai par shaitan hai
Nikal jaati hai aksar yuhi
Zindagi......

16 comments:

Mihir said...

pretty cool blog.
osum template!
:P

Sunil Kumar said...

Hi Purva,

I didn't liked your Hindi poem much, but your other post are actually the post of thinking woman. I have got the essance, but somewhere it looked like discrete. May be you are not in much touch with Hindi poems.

Would like to see more from you.

Keep good work up.

Sunil Kumar

Pratik said...

सुन्दर, प्रवाहमय कविता है। अगर नागरी में होती तो पढ़ने में ज़्यादा सुविधा होती।

The Acid Tongue said...

oh my!!!!!
that was so beautiful.. so different from the perfect pieces i read. straight from the heart.. and it screams so.
IN love with it on first read hehe.

PS: Thanks for visiting my space. Do drop by again. "Achha Lagega" ;)

StandbyMind said...

Kya baat hai....Bahut hi sundar shabdo mein apne jindagi ko ubharne ka prayas ki ya hain!

Saral shabdo ka prayog..
Bhasha mein gati hain...

Loved it!

purvabhatia said...

Thanks Mihir

@ Sunil
ya i don't write hindi poems much but i think this one conveys what i really wanted to say. Anyways, I'd try improving my hindi :)

@ Pratik
Shukriya Pratik ji

@ The acid tongue
apka comment acha laga :)

@ Standbymind
shukriya :)

Dream catcher said...

bahot khoob mohtarma..accha laga

u shd write n put here more of this..itne bhaar baaton ke baat..baarish ki ek booond si ye kavita..accha laga.;)

Rajeev said...

I am not good at hindi! :(

रंजू said...

zindagi sikhaati hai jeena
apni badalti waqt ki chaalo se

dikahti hai rang sukh dukh ke
apne hi bichaaye jaalo se

bahut sundar likha hai ..:)sach mein padhana achha laga :)

Madhura said...

I love the way your blog looks!

Sanjeet Tripathi said...

सबसे पहले तो अपने ब्लॉग को इतना सुंदर रखने के लिए मेरी बधाई लें , उपर से आपकी इस कविता ने बांध सा लिया मुझे।
बढ़िया लिखती हैं आप, फ़ुरसत में बैठकर पड़ेगा पूरा।
शुभकामनाएं

Richa said...

"Yeh jo hai zindagi...tumhari aankhon mein dikhti hai...tumhari hasi mein jhalakti hai...tumhare dil mein basti hai.."

I think the poem rocks...n I'd like to say that it may seem not be a very good hindi poem literally...but no one can miss its essence...it just projects the beautiful n lively heart behind the person that is Purva...n i think that's all that is important...its straight from your heart..loved it...

Ankit Gupta said...

aapki ye pankhtiya mein kahin mujhe kuch chulbuli natkhat mashooniyat se bhari hui shetaani lagi.

lekhak ne jo prayas kiya hai, vo wakyi mein ullekniy hai

waah !!
ANkIT

Honey Digra said...

Well this poem is great.. though i didnt understand much... But being a poet... i can say this much that the depth your poetry possess is immeasurable....

Anyways great job done!!...

Jitendra Chaudhary said...

वाह वाह!
मैने कविता को हिन्दी मे भी टाइप कर दिया है, यदि आप बेहतर समझें तो इसे भी अपनी पोस्ट मे नीचे डाल दें।

काफी के कप से महकती हुई
बारिश की बूंदों से टपकती हुई
और उन बूंदों पे नाचती पत्तों सी
जिन्दगी मिली.....अच्छा लगा

एक बच्चे के होठों पे बैठी थी
छुप रही थी.......
मैने ध्यान से देखा तब दिखी
अच्छा लगा

सो रही थी चाँदनी रात में
एक पेड़ के नीचे
उस आसमान में छुपते चाँद मे नज़र आयी
अच्छा लगा

बह रही थी एक नदी सी
चुपकर कई लहरों में
उन लहरों के बीच
झांकती नज़र आयी
अच्छा लगा।

नटखट है....चालाक है
मासूम है, पर शैतान है
निकल जाती है अक्सर यूंही
जिन्दगी..........

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