There is no moon in the skyNo sour things to grumble about
It's a 'just' thought...a 'just' entry
It's not about a sudden moment of joy
Nor about a sudden tear in the eye
But about something in between
It's not about how wonderful the day was
Or how it was without a cause
It is about something that was in between
I write not to tell you about how much I love someone
Nor to share certain disgust within
But about the feeling that lies in between
I have no stories about the battle I won
And no elegies of the ones I couldn't
But about something lost in between
And as I write I realise...
It's best to leave certain things unsaid
for a pleasant today and a peaceful tomorrow
....and all the moments that sleep in between...
9 comments:
Liked the end part the most
lovely ...composed to perfections shall I say ...the though about :In between.." in the writeup was very true and inquisitive..
hope to read more form you
cheers !
I like ur writing style. u live in a world of ur own. very sensitive u r. beautiful.
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Lovely piece.....
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thank you :)
i was actually in this state of mind for the past couple of weeks, and you hit it right on w/ your poem!
usually, there's always something or the other happening in life or my head. but sometimes, its just... plain old simple... like a routine... like things 'in between'. nothing to be amazingly happy over or nothing to be terribly sad over.
oh i really liked this poem! great job! :)
Didn't know you write so well but then only a pician can write things like this...Will follow your blog to see some more thought provoking words...
HAPPY NEW YEAR
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