In Between...

The night ain't beautiful
There is no moon in the sky
No sour things to grumble about
It's a 'just' thought...a 'just' entry

It's not about a sudden moment of joy
Nor about a sudden tear in the eye
But about something in between

It's not about how wonderful the day was
Or how it was without a cause
It is about something that was in between

I write not to tell you about how much I love someone
Nor to share certain disgust within
But about the feeling that lies in between

I have no stories about the battle I won
And no elegies of the ones I couldn't
But about something lost in between

And as I write I realise...
It's best to leave certain things unsaid
for a pleasant today and a peaceful tomorrow
....and all the moments that sleep in between...

9 comments:

Tushar Mangl said...

Liked the end part the most

gauravbrills said...

lovely ...composed to perfections shall I say ...the though about :In between.." in the writeup was very true and inquisitive..


hope to read more form you
cheers !

A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...

I like ur writing style. u live in a world of ur own. very sensitive u r. beautiful.

restless


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A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...

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Standbymind said...

Lovely piece.....

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Purva said...

thank you :)

Zephyr said...

i was actually in this state of mind for the past couple of weeks, and you hit it right on w/ your poem!
usually, there's always something or the other happening in life or my head. but sometimes, its just... plain old simple... like a routine... like things 'in between'. nothing to be amazingly happy over or nothing to be terribly sad over.

oh i really liked this poem! great job! :)

Aftab said...

Didn't know you write so well but then only a pician can write things like this...Will follow your blog to see some more thought provoking words...

HAPPY NEW YEAR

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